The First Patient – Christopher Victor Burgess

 Scene:   When the curtain rises the following characters are seated in a dentist’s waiting room: Women 1- 8 and Men 1- 8. Some of them are reading magazines or newspapers. Man 4 has a rough bandage tied round his jaw. He is holding the bandage and groaning. Man 3, Woman 5 and Woman 6 are just entering the waiting- room.

     Woman 5: We’ll have some time to wait before the dentist sees us, dear.

  Woman 6:   So I see.

  Woman 5: But I’ll show you some of my holiday photographs to pass the time.

  Man 3, Woman 5, and Woman 6 sit. Woman 5 takes a packet of photographs from her handbag. Throughout the play she concentrates on showing her photographs.) 

  Man 5:   What time do you make it, Jack?

  Man 6:  Almost eight- thirty. The dentist should be along any moment now.

  Woman 6:   Isn’t it a dreadful hour of the morning to see a Dentist! I’m not half awake yet.

  Man 5:  I hope he won’t be long. I’m going to be late for work anyway.

  Man 6:  Something should be done about dental hours. I’ve always said so and I’ll go on saying so.

  (Enter Nurse.) 

  Woman 6:  Good, the dentist shouldn’t be long now.

  Woman 5:  And this is one of the boarding houses at Waddling- on- sea. Our boarding house. Those are the steps I fell up. We nearly died laughing.

  Woman 6:  It looks quite a nice place.

  Woman 5:  Oh, it was, it was. And the landlady was a dear.

  (Woman 5 shows another photograph.)  This is one of hers. You can’t quite see her face.You see, my finger got in the way, but she has such a nice face.

  Woman 6:   I’m sure she has.

  (Enter Woman 7 and the Little Girl.) 

  Woman 7:   Oh, do come along, Dorothea.

  Little Girl:  I don’t want to see the dentist. I won’t! I won’t!

  Woman 7:  Now, Dorothea, remember what your daddy said. If you won’t have your teeth seen to, no more ice- lollies.

  Little Girl:  I don’t want any ice- lollies.

  (The Little Girl is dragged to her seat by Woman 7. She sits weeping. Man 4 groans loudly.) 

  Woman 4:   Here’s the dentist.

  Woman 3:   And about time, too.

  (Enter Dentist.) 

  Dentist:   Could I have the first patient, please?

  (Exit Dentist into surgery.) 

  Woman 1:   That’s you, Joe.

  (Man 1 and Woman 1 stand.) 

  Man 1:   Yes, that’s me.

  Woman 1: 

Now, make sure he pulls out the right one, Joe.

  Man 1:   I will.

  Woman 1:   Good- bye, Joe, I’ll wait for you.

  (Exit Man 1 into surgery. Woman 1 sits.) 

  Woman 2:   I believe the Dentist is ever so good.

  Woman 3: 

Yes, he took out six for Mrs. Johnstone, and she never felt a thing.

  (Enter Woman 8 with the Small Boy.) 

  Woman 8: 

Now Maurice, there’s nothing to be afraid of.

  Small Boy:   I’m not afraid.

Woman 8 

Just a little pull, and ever such a weeny tug, and all the pain will be gone.

Small Boy:  There is no need to treat me like a baby. I’m not afraid of a dentist.

  Woman 8: Now sit down quietly, Maurice, and I’m sure the nice dentist won’t be long.

  Small Boy:  I think I’ll get a magazine, I feel like reading.

  (The small boy goes to the table and looks through the pile of magazines and newspapers.) 

  Woman 8:   All right, dear, just as you like.

  (Woman 8 sits.) 

  Man 5:  I’m going to ask for gas. I’ll never forget the last time.

  Man 1:  I knew a chap once. He asked for gas. It was the last time he ever asked for anything.

  Man 2:   Is that a fact?

  (Enter Nurse from the surgery. She walks across the stage and exits left.) 

  Man 4:  I shouldn’t ask for gas, or any of these drugs either. It’s unnatural I say. Give me the old- fashioned methods.

  Man 5:  You can have them. I’ll have it without the pain.

  Woman 5:   And you’ll love this one, dear.

  Woman 6:   I’m sure I will.

  Woman 5:  It’s one of me riding a donkey along the sands.

  Woman 6:   Oh, I say!

  Woman 5:  Isn’t it a scream, dear? I sat on it the wrong way round, just for the laugh.

  (Enter Nurse left, ferrying a large hammer. She crosses the stage and goes into the surgery.) 

  Man 6:   Was that a hammer she was carrying?

  Man 7:   I’ve seen dentists use some queer tools.

  Man 6:  Well, if it wasn’t a hammer, I should be attending an eye specialist and not a dentist.

  Woman 5:   I hope he isn’t going to use it.

  Man 3:   It’s a peculiar thing to have in a surgery.

  (The sound of hammering is heard from the surgery. Everyone looks at the surgery door and then at one another.) 

  Woman 1:   Oh! Joe! My poor Joe! Oh, what will I do? (Standing)

  Woman 2:  I shouldn’t worry. The dentist probably knows what he’s doing.

  Woman 1:Yes, but does Joe? Surely he’s not hammering on poor Joe’s tooth.

  Woman 2:  Now, sit down and don’t excite yourself. I’m sure Joe is quite all right.

  (Woman 1 sits. There is more hammering from the surgery. Woman 1 is about to stand but Woman 2 restrains her.) 

  Woman 2:  There, there, dear, do sit down quietly.

  Man 5:   I don’t like the sound of that.

  Man 4:  I shouldn’t worry. These dentists know what they’re doing. I hope.

  (Nurse enters from the surgery and walks across the stage and out left. Everyone watches her in silence.) 

  Woman 7:   She didn’t look very worried, anyway.

  Woman 8:   No, it’s the patient who worries.

  Woman 7:  I say let him worry. Worry is natural. It never did anyone any harm.

  Woman 1:  I wish you wouldn’t talk like that, with my poor Joe in there, may be writhing in agony.

  (Enter Nurse left. She is carrying a large pair of pliers. She walks across the stage and into the surgery. Man 4 groans and everyone groans after him. Woman 1 watches in horror. She stands as the Nurse exits into the surgery.) 

  1:   No, no, it can’t be true! They can’t do this to Joe. Not to my Joe.

  (Woman 2 forces Woman 1 back into her seat.) 

  Woman 2:   There, there, don’t upset yourself, dear. There’s nothing to worry about.

  (Woman 1 starts weeping and sobbing.) 

  Man 3:   A bit big, wasn’t it?

Man 4: Nothing to what they used in the old days. I heard of a chap once the roots of whose teeth were wrapped round his jaw- bone. He was five hours in the chair.

Man 3:   None the worse for it, I’ll bet.

  (There is a sudden screech of metal from the surgery. Woman 1 gasps with horror and is about to make a dash for the surgery door when she is dragged back by Woman 2. Man 4 groans loudly. The Small Boy and the Little Girl at the table start a fight about a magazine they both want. Woman 8 and Woman 7 attempt to separate them. Through all this noise Woman 5 is still trying to show her photographs.) 

  Little Girl:   It’s mine! It’s mine!

  Small Boy:   No, it’s mine! I saw it first.

  Woman 7: 

Woman 7: Sit down, Dorothea. Sit down and be quiet. I’ll tell your daddy about this. Then there’ll be trouble. Really, it’s the last time I’ll bring you anywhere.

  Little Girl:   See if I care.

  Woman 6:  I wish some people would keep their children under control.

  Woman 7:   Well, really!

(At last the little girl and the small boy settle into their seats. They are both sulking.) 

Man 2:  There should be a special waiting- room for children.  (The metallic screech is heard again from the surgery. Fresh sobs from Woman1.) 

  Woman 1:   I can’t stand it. Oh, Joe! Joe! Joe!

  (Man 4 groans.) 

  Small Boy:   What was that noise, Mummy?

  Woman 8:   Don’t ask awkward questions, Maurice.

Man 7: I’ll tell you, little boy. That noise was a man having a tooth out. That’s how it’s going to sound when you have yours out, only much, much louder, because then it’ll be inside your head.

 Woman 6:   What a thing to tell a small boy!

  Man 6:   Disgusting!

  Man 7:   It’ll do the lad good. Bring ’em up natural, I always say.

  Small Boy:  Oh, Mummy, Mummy, take me to school! Quick, take me to school!

  Woman 8:  Take you to school? What on earth do you mean?

  Small Boy:  I haven’t got toothache at all. I was only joking. I just wanted to get off school. Take me to school. Mummy, please.

  (Everyone laughs.) 

  Woman 8:  I’ll take you to school all right (Woman 8 takes the Small Boy by the ear. She drags him out.) and I’ll get the headmaster to give you a good thrashing.

  (Exit Woman 8 and the Small Boy. The Small Boy is yelling.) 

  Man 5:  A little discipline, that’s what he wants.

  (Woman 5 is still showing her photographs.) 

  Woman 5:  This one should make quite an impression on you, dear.

  (There is a loud hammering from the surgery.) 

  Woman 6:   Yes, it does.

  (Enter Nurse from the surgery). 

  Dentist’s Voice (off): 

Do hurry, Nurse or we’ll never get this thing shift.

  (Nurse walks across the stage and off left.) 

  Man 6:   Well, really, I don’t think I can wait. (Standing)

  Man 5:   Neither can I. I’ll be very late for work. (Standing)

  (Exit Man 5 and Man 6.) 

  Woman 6:  But surely, they can’t really be using those tools to take out a tooth.

  Woman 4:   You heard what the Man said.

  Woman 6:   And those men have gone, too.

  Man 7:   Cowards, every one of them. They can’t take it.

  Little Girl:  Mummy, I was only joking about my toothache, too. I haven’t really got one. I was only trying to get off school.

  Woman 7:Nonsense, Dorothea, you know your tooth is as black as the kitchen range. You’re only trying to get out of it.

  (The Little Girl breaks into a howl.) 

  Man 2:   I can’t stand howling children. I’m off. (Standing)

  Man 3:   And I can’t stand them either. I’m coming with you. (Standing)

  (Exit Man 2 and Man 3.) 

Woman 7: Now, see what you’ve done, Dorothea, you’ve chased those men away.

  Little Girl:   They’re lucky.

  (The Little Girl howls again. The Nurse enters, this time with a hacksaw.) 

  Woman 1:  Oh, Joe! Joe! He’ll never stand it. The sound of sawing always did put his teeth on edge.

  Man 7:  This time the saw will be on the edge of his teeth.

  Woman 2:   Oh, you horrible Man!

  Man 7:   Can’t I even make a joke?

  Man 8:   We need something to cheer us up.

  Woman 4:   Surely it’s against the law for a dentist to use a saw like that.

  (The sound of violent sawing is heard from the surgery. Man 4 groans loudly.) 

  Woman 1:   Oh no, Joe! No, Joe!

  (Woman 1 makes a dash for the door but is prevented from opening it by Woman 2 and Woman 6.) 

  Woman 3:   You really must control yourself.

  Woman 2:  There, there, dear. I’m sure it’s not as bad as it sounds.

  (They place Woman 1 back in her seat.) 

  Woman 1:  I’m not waiting to find out. I’ve heard enough.

  Woman 3:  I prefer to keep my toothache.

  Woman 4:  So do I. Me too. Those pliers would never fit my mouth, anyway. It’s better than being murdered, anyway.

  (Standing) 

  (Exit Woman 3, Woman 4 and Woman 6.) 

Man 7: Just watch them go, cowards every one of them.

  Woman 2:It’s all very well you talking this way. You don’t seem to have any nerves at all.

 Man 7:  This is nothing to some of the things I’ve heard of. I could tell you things that would make your hair stand on end. There was once…

  Woman 2: I’m sure we don’t want to hear it. My hair is standing on end already.

(The sawing is heard again, even louder and harsher this time. Woman 1 wails and Man 4 groans.) 

  Man 1:   Of course I’m all right. Why shouldn’t I be all right?

  Woman 1:   But, Joe, all that hammering and sawing.

  Man 1:   Oh, that! That was only the dentist trying to force open his instrument cabinet.

  Woman 1:   His cabinet?

  Man 1:   Yes, you see he lost the key.

 Woman 1:   So he hasn’t done anything to you, Joe!

Man 1: Not a thing, and I can’t wait any longer this morning. I’ve made an appointment with him for this evening instead. The nurse gave me some pills to deaden the pain in the meantime.

  Woman 1:   Oh, Joe, I was so upset.

  Man 1:  Well, it’s all right now, Emily, so let’s go.

  (Woman I and Man I go out left. A moment later the Nurse enters from the surgery. She is walking across the stage when the Dentist enters left. The Dentist is waving a key.) 

  Dentist: I found it. Believe it or not, but it was under the telephone directory. What an awful waste of time!

  Nurse:  I’m afraid the first patient couldn’t wait. However, he made an appointment for this evening.

  Dentist:   Fair enough. I’ll take the next patient.

  (Dentist goes into the surgery. Nurse turns to Woman 5 who is still looking at her photographs.) 

  Nurse:   Now, madam, the dentist is ready.

  (Woman 5 looks up.) 

  Woman 5:   Do you mean me, Miss?

  Nurse:  Yes, would you step into the surgery, please?

  (Nurse goes into the surgery.) 

  Woman 5:  Dear me, that long queue did move quickly, didn’t it?

  (Woman 5 follows the Nurse into the surgery.) CURTAIN 

     About the Author 

  Christopher Victor Burgess   is known as C.V Burgess. He is a humorous playwright. His situational humour intensifies the emotions of the characters in the play. His plays usually accommodate a number of characters. His famous works are ‘Short Plays for Large Classes’, ‘Teach yourself Speech Training’ and ‘Classroom Playhouse Verse in Action’.